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Review Detail of Fongletto in The First Store System

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I read about 300 chapters before dropping. It's hard to give this a bad review and find faults. It's also hard to give it a positive review. The author has imagined a very thought out world. The detail and description and history and races has been considered and perfected to a very fine point. The authors writing style and quality is fine, and while the side characters are not perfectly fleshed out they are also not generic. The problems only really show because the story development is all over the place and it feels like the author doesn't really know where he wants to take the story. In 300 chapters there is very little to no development or room for improvement. The MC never faces challenges or has any pressure to grow or change. The Author can't seem to decide if he wants a system story or a virtual video game world story. And somehow in both worlds the MC is an omnipotent god. Overall this novel is good to have something on the back burner while you're waiting for other stories with a more fulfilling plot. But if you're looking for something that gets the heart beating and as satisfying and complete arcs go elsewhere.

The First Store System

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