Mohitkumar
I actually enjoyed the novel and i cna e en say that i like it, but i have a small problem and that is the main character, the main character thinks like an adult, but the way our author writes it makes mc look like a 12 year old waiting for his welldeserved candy. he keeps saying that "he is weak, he needs to get stronger and that he shouldnt be arrogant" BUT ke keeps being arrogant and barely use his brain. repeating the same mistake over and over and over again and after leaening his lesson he would say "Ah, i have to not be arrogant" like for god sakes he has a ducking diary that he wrote about how he should not attract attention why are you attracting attention. Well other than the mc and the familiar characyers with TNE i like the novel
Hello, the recently self-hired editor here. I found this novel accidentally on Web, and I hit gold here. I haven't read Author's POV much, that's why this novel is quite fresh for me. I was keeping up with the novel in 1st volume but the novel itself carried me in the next volume. The humor, grammar and author's flow of writing improved by a large margin. The world spread is also getting wider and its getting exciting. But many people's minds were stuck on the 'GRAMMAR'. Honestly, mine too. And then I thought, why not try it myself? I've never done this, but it's fun. Author's grammar is improving and I might be unemployed soon. Jokes aside, I strongly recommend all of you this novel as it is filled with well written action and well paced events within. Read "The Extra's Survival".
except for some grammatical issues everything else is just WOW!! now after reading some initial chapters you might think that this has some similarities with 'Author POV'..... but no. The story is very different than author pov, it may seems a little similar in initial chapter but that clearly display that the author is inspired by 'author's pov' NOT even a ounce of copying is done.
Hello there author! I hope I'm not bothering too much with this review. I felt the need to write because I haven't seen any updates to this novel for 3 months. It's one of my favorites, right on the 2nd place and I'd like to see it continue. I saw that the other novel was updated and I thought that maybe you have some free time to write about this one as well? I know your situation, I hope to receive an answer as long as it takes until you update this novel. A wonderful novella, please keep writing!
I really like it. I enjoy this type of genre a lot so good job author. The grammar could be better but I understand that it's the author's first book and were at the beginning chaps. Some parts are a little confusing because of this but it's way better than some of the Chinese cultivation novels where everything is incoherent. Anyway loving the novel so far so plz don't drop. Thx author