Review Detail of Obese_Pigeon in The Extra's Survival
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I actually enjoyed the novel and i cna e en say that i like it, but i have a small problem and that is the main character, the main character thinks like an adult, but the way our author writes it makes mc look like a 12 year old waiting for his welldeserved candy. he keeps saying that "he is weak, he needs to get stronger and that he shouldnt be arrogant" BUT ke keeps being arrogant and barely use his brain. repeating the same mistake over and over and over again and after leaening his lesson he would say "Ah, i have to not be arrogant" like for god sakes he has a ducking diary that he wrote about how he should not attract attention why are you attracting attention. Well other than the mc and the familiar characyers with TNE i like the novel
The Extra's Survival
Mohitkumar
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I have added the words repeatedly which made the starting quite annoying. That's why I can only ask to think like even though this he can't implement it as he can't control the situation. Just think about it as an actor even though he has gone to the script that doesn't mean he can play the script with a perfect expression which the scene. Overall just think of it as an excuse for my poor writing
also can you make it so that the mc dont get arrogant for some stupid reasons? cuz if i was him and i just killed a orc with everything i have instead of being proud i would be scared of thinking what a full grown orc could do instead of ebing arrogant
Mohitkumar:I have added the words repeatedly which made the starting quite annoying. That's why I can only ask to think like even though this he can't implement it as he can't control the situation. Just think about it as an actor even though he has gone to the script that doesn't mean he can play the script with a perfect expression which the scene. Overall just think of it as an excuse for my poor writing
Obese_Pigeon:KK, i hope in the future the situasions wont feel very forced, good luck on your journey