Drei05
This story reminded me of one novel that I read long ago, but the author knows how to stand out !! Similar, yet so different π³ Everything is very detailed and well explained, so no one could be confused. ππ» The main lead is funny and the system too.. I wish I had that system in real life too. π This story is really funny, yet captivating. π§ββοΈ A lot of people could relate to the main lead. Well done, author ! Iβm following your updates !! βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈ
I really like this novel, it's well-written, coherent, and coherence, as a newbie, I really felt jealous while reading your work :> The story is interesting and has a room for improvement. I just suggest making the MC more realistic, I mean you would panick, if you transformed into a different world and had a robotic voice talking with you suddenly, but the MC character was pretty calm about it, it's cool and all, but I just suggest you to show more realistic human emotions in the MC. However, you don't have to change anything in the previous chapters. Anyways, it is really a fun novel and I read only 8 chapter as I'm writing this review, it's super fun and I like the POV. I give it a solid 5~
Deez novel is nuts! I like it! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Yeah, those aren't nuts, they're eggplants!