Reviews of The Diamond Field
The Diamond Field
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It's the first time I'm reading a sports based novel. And I already like it. From what I have read, apart from silly typos the story is really good one and worth reading. The starting ,the game background everything is really neatly and beautifully written. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the Great work Author π
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A wonderful story revolving around a kid and his dreams. There are certain typos in the beginning but in later chapters author has improved. The story is nicely narrated and easy to understand. Learning about baseball simultaneously along with a good story is also good. Just take care of errors in tenses and typos. This is a nice story.
I really liked the story, I haven't read many books that had central themes around sports, but I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the direction the story was going and the development with the mc is gradual and natural. The transitions from different povs is used well and it helps complement the story as a whole. There were a few grammar mistakes, but that's easy to fix with a quick reskim. The only problem I found was with some of the ways sentences are structured. For example, whenever the MC's father died I seemed like he was just listing things and how they happened, this kind of detracted from the emotional impact of the story. But this is just a small knit pick that can be easily adjusted, keep up the great work author.
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