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The Curse of Immortality

This is the story of the person who defeated the evil god and was cursed with immortality.

NightRavensEye · Fantasy
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Chapter 1: How it all Began!

While traveling in a carriage to the city of Carus, a young boy asked his father to tell him a story. His father said that he will tell him the greatest story of the hero who saved the world.

*It was 10 thousand years ago. The evil god Harun, wanted to destroy the world we live in. To protect the world the god's summoned the mightiest hero called Niki. He received the blessing of protection from Harol the god of protection, blessing of magic from Uviel the god of magic and the blessing of wisdom from the god Ronen. He travelled the world fighting the worshipers of the evil god. And become strong enough to defeat the Evil god. Then with the blessing of the gods he defeated the evil god and disappeared like a ghost that didn't even existed.*

After hearing the story of the traveller, a certain passenger on the carriage said "That's not what happed at that time. The story you said is nothing but a fiction that was written by the people who knew nothing about what happened. About the person who lost everything he holds dear to him."

After hearing what the 18 year's of old looking boy had said, the traveller replied "Then why don't you tell us the actual story that had happened at that time."

That boy didn't reply to the traveller.

The little boy asked and asked again "Please tell me the real story, please, please, pretty please.."

After hearing the little boy plead again and again he smiled and said "Fine, I shall tell you the real story, I shall tell you the truth."

*10,000 years ago, the evil god Harun wanted to destroy the world. When the other gods wanted to stop him, they summoned a hero. A hero who was suppose to be strong enough to stop the evil god. The mightiest hero called Niki. He got the blessing of protection, magic and wisdom from the gods. But the evil god Harun already knew about the other gods plan. He took counter measures and defeated the hero before he could be powerful enough to stop the evil god.*

The little boy asked "If the hero had died then who defeated the evil god?".

*When the hero was defeated many country had already fell to their doom. In that fight to defeat the evil god like other's a certain person lost everything he had.

His mother, his father, a big sister who loved him so dearly as if he could forget about the world with them. Everything he had was gone, reduced to ashes. He had lost everything.

He wanted revenge, He wanted the power that could help him get his revenge. He wanted to kill that evil god who snatched everything from Him. Good for him that the god's didn't forsaken him. The god's didn't forsaken this doomed world. An unknown god felt petty on him.

He gave him the power to do what he wanted. To get his revenge he was given the blessing of Destruction. With that power he defeated the evil god. And shattered his consciousness and sealed it in different places where none could ever reach.

When he thought that "This was it. This is my end. I did what I had to do. I got revenge. Now it's finally my time to meat my sister, to meat my family." But that was not in his destiny. With the power to destroy the evil god, with the blessing of Destruction. He was also given the curse of immortality. Again and again he asked "Why? why did you give me this power? why did you give me this curse?" But the unknown god didn't answer any of the question.

He waited and waited for that god to reply. 10 years turned into 100. 100 turned into thousands. Even now he is longing for death, longing for his question to be answered.*

After hearing the story of the boy the traveller said "You got some wild imagination kid. If the follower of the Hero Niki hears what you had said they would rush here to kill you."

Suddenly a group of bandit's attacked the carriage. The traveller and his son was badly wounded. A girl from the back of the carriage jumped out with his magic wand and trying her best to defend the traveller and the boy. But because there were multiple magic user in the bandit's it was getting out of her hand.

The girl told the boy that he should take the traveller and that little boy and run as fast and as far as he can. She said if she can survive and fate allows them to meet again then she would like to hear the story again.

After hearing what that girl said, the boy replied "Until now, no one has every appreciated my story. Everyone that had listened the story said, that I am a mad man. It's the first time someone acknowledge me. For that I will accept your wish. As fate has allowed us to meat like this I shall protect you."

Hearing what that boy said, the girl thought that he had lost his mind. That girl said "Are you out of your mind, do you think you are like the person of the story you said? Or do you have a screw loose in that head of yours?"

Without even listening what that girl was saying he started to enchant spells "Oh earth create a shield to protect the people around me".

After hearing what he said the girl replied "Are you trying to invoke magic? do you even know how to enchant? just run with the people until I can hold this bandit's"

Surprising for her suddenly the earth around them began to move. It created a dome around them.

The girl asked "how did he had done it? How did he do it without even using proper enchantment and spell?"

The boy replied "If you have lived as long me this is nothing."

With that being said he defeated the bandit's with earth magic. But didn't kill them. The girl asked "You have enough strength to kill them, then why did you not?"

The boy replied "Strength is not something that should be used to trample over weak, it is something that should be used to protect."

After defeating the bandit's he healed the traveller and the little boy. The traveller was grateful for protecting him and his child and for saving them. He said that he had an inn in the city of Carus. And would like for them to stay there while they were in city for saving them.

Both of them couldn't refuse the inn keeper and continued their journey to the city of Carus.

Hello there, this is my first time writing a novel. So please do tell me if I am doing anything wrong or your thouhts on the story

Sincearly

-Writer :D

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