Reviews of THE BLUE EYES [BL]

What I liked: The author thought out the history and origin of the central conflict. The characterization is also there. What needs improvement: the author can use the good old "show don't tell" writing advice. I also suggest the use of editing and proofreading softwares like Grammarly. In general, the story has potential, even in a saturated genre, it can deliver something fresh.

Well, this is my first time reading a BL fiction. Although the genre is not my cup of tea, I'm quite satisfied with the quality of the writing. It's not overly complicated but quite sophisticated. Overall, it's a good read!

Okay, dear... With a werewolfs' story, you're in my territory actually ;p The plot is interesting and the author has ideas. She puts lots of effort into writing and I can just wish her good luck! Readers, give it a try! Now, notes for the author: I'll give you 5/5 to encourage you and because it is worth it. But you have to proofread as you have lots of repetition. My advice: write, let the text rests, then proofread ;)

Love this story author, really amazing....... Especially for a bl lover like me, hehe. I am in heaven............... Best of luck. Waiting for more. ....... Stay safe and keep writing amazing stories like that....

Woah! I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.

Very nice. No grammatical errors that I can see. The prologue is very dense in facts, but that is very handy going on later in the story, as less has to be explained. I really like the concept for werewolves here, it's a rather unique take and certainly a nice change from the usual. Keep it up!

There are only few chapters when I'm reading this but this book is good. It has neat backstory making it clear from the beginning. Because of the character introduction, it is easy to follow the story. The writing quality is excellent, making the book so immersive. Overall, a much more balanced book with a ton of potential. Waiting for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!1

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