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The Blackened Mc In Fantasy World

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Read The Blackened Mc In Fantasy World novel written by the author HuangTian1156 on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Fantasy stories, covering harem, villain, genius, vampire, werewolf. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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When Stephen Peter was betrayed by his childhood friends.... this things, how will he change? Will he be able to stay the same person once he was?! or is he going to..... This Novel is written by me and is my original novel. I don't know will you people like it or not?..just give some reviews about my mistake so that I can correct them. Thank you for reading. The update will be a bit slow, as I started writing recently. The artwork doesn't belong to me, if anyone knows the artist of the photo, please remind me. I will tag him

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I think your ideas are fine but there's some spelling and grammatical mistakes that I recommend editing. Free apps like grammarly will do wonders for your work because you don't want small mistakes to put off new readers. Another thing you can work on is polishing the dialogue, especially with the interactions. You don't want the characters to interact oddly in a manner that seems far too unrealistic, which makes it so that it becomes harders for readers to connect.

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I like the story itself, and the characters too. It's easy to read without paying attention to the time going by, but. There are mistakes and you know it. Those mistakes distract, keep you turning back to read again and understand. I highly recommend you to use any app that can correct your mistakes, I use "Grammarly" and was never disappointed by using it. Also, personal advice, try to separate dialogue and description. It will ease reading and helps to better understand the things going on. Good luck!

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