Jo_J
The synopsis is true, no one is perfect into this world. Okay to the story, the character is well build the deliberation towards the story is good and the background setting is also easy to describe over all the story is easy to comprehend. It has a potential, sorry I can't criticize grammar cause English is not my first language. But is a well created and wonderful story. Every one must try and Check this story out, is interesting and talk about how real world works into a new generations of people especially millennials somehow experiences.
The story has a gripping start, and then it continues at a slower pace. There is a hint of romance coming, and I look forward to seeing where the author will take us with this story. --- The writing quality is good. There are few mistakes here and there, but nothing that would prevent you from enjoying the story. Keep up the hard work, author! --- Review swap: "Amara - Reunion"
Honest Review: I'm not one for romance novels, but this one is genuinely intriguing. The writing is very nice, which is refreshing when you look at how many novels there are with bad grammar on this site. In the beginning the dialogue leaves a bit to be desired, but the author steadily builds the characters. Overall, it is a very promising book.
Ngl, from the impression I got from the prologue, this novel seems to come off of a great start! The descriptions are detailed but not to wordy, informative but not irrelevant, and I can imagine every single thing the author illustrated in their novel as if I was there in real life. The first paragraph the author wrote in the prologue hit me deep although it was short. I could understand it on a personal level even though I have never been in such a situation before. A good example of emphasizing emotions in writing. I have added this to my library and I’m looking forward to see how the story progresses. Hope you all have a wonderful day and happy reading!✨
Sometimes in life, it's the small things that matters. This is the message of the story. Yet sometimes in life, the world will try to fk you up for wanting small things. This is another truth the novel shows you. As a concept it is nothing new, but the execution is interesting. And love the name, Jo. It actually fking makes sense in this story.
We would take it as a manual of: "... from pursuing his dreams, he decided to stop being a perfectionist." How many today start something and then leave it? Instead of accelerating all the time to stop short, it is better to go slow. Are they with you? ... they will thank you. The book reminds us that with such perfection, many mistakes have been overcome, but never all.?