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The Bet

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star_dreamer
star_dreamerLv3star_dreamer

This story is different in a good context. I find it interesting. The plot in intriguing, characters seem well thought out and the flow is also good.

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The_divine_oracle
The_divine_oracleLv10The_divine_oracle

I like the way the author is showing that there are places where we need to compromise. We cannot always have everything we want. The story is relaxing and easy to relate to. The characters are also really interesting. Keep up the good work.

Alexandra_An
Alexandra_AnLv2Alexandra_An

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YIANUWANGXIAO
YIANUWANGXIAOLv2YIANUWANGXIAO

The synopsis is true, no one is perfect into this world. Okay to the story, the character is well build the deliberation towards the story is good and the background setting is also easy to describe over all the story is easy to comprehend. It has a potential, sorry I can't criticize grammar cause English is not my first language. But is a well created and wonderful story. Every one must try and Check this story out, is interesting and talk about how real world works into a new generations of people especially millennials somehow experiences.

RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15RedSonia

The story has a gripping start, and then it continues at a slower pace. There is a hint of romance coming, and I look forward to seeing where the author will take us with this story. --- The writing quality is good. There are few mistakes here and there, but nothing that would prevent you from enjoying the story. Keep up the hard work, author! --- Review swap: "Amara - Reunion"

LeeMaRi1999
LeeMaRi1999Lv2LeeMaRi1999

The author does a really great job of showing how important it is to take a break from pursuing our dreams. Perfection is great, but sometimes it can become poison to everyone involved. I liked that the characters were introduced through a bet!

takunithecat
takunithecatLv1takunithecat

Honest Review: I'm not one for romance novels, but this one is genuinely intriguing. The writing is very nice, which is refreshing when you look at how many novels there are with bad grammar on this site. In the beginning the dialogue leaves a bit to be desired, but the author steadily builds the characters. Overall, it is a very promising book.

Cuddles_Sempai13
Cuddles_Sempai13Lv1Cuddles_Sempai13

Ngl, from the impression I got from the prologue, this novel seems to come off of a great start! The descriptions are detailed but not to wordy, informative but not irrelevant, and I can imagine every single thing the author illustrated in their novel as if I was there in real life. The first paragraph the author wrote in the prologue hit me deep although it was short. I could understand it on a personal level even though I have never been in such a situation before. A good example of emphasizing emotions in writing. I have added this to my library and I’m looking forward to see how the story progresses. Hope you all have a wonderful day and happy reading!✨

Idczhen
IdczhenLv14Idczhen

Hmm, the storyline is promising and it's worth a try. The author got a creative mind to develop this kind of story but he should update more chapters. I know how hard writing a chapter is but daily update and it will be successful. I speak from experience.

Minxs
MinxsLv10Minxs

Great story. Honestly don't see much you need to improve on. Just keep up the good work. One thing I would mention, just my opinion though, is that having a ton of dialogue detracts from story setting. Everything else looks great!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Hello author! I like the story so far! This is my second review and it only shows that this story is that great. I like how you narrate things and the description was vivid. I gotta read more in the future!

basementerz
basementerzLv2basementerz

This story has a nice starting to it and the writing is very neat. The plot is also very interesting. Characters are very good and easy to understand. I hope you'll update frequently. This book is an excellent job. keep up the good work.😊

maxyperson
maxypersonLv2maxyperson

Pretty fun premise with a light-hearted feel so far. Good work. Keep it up. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

catvi
catviLv5catvi

Sometimes in life, it's the small things that matters. This is the message of the story. Yet sometimes in life, the world will try to fk you up for wanting small things. This is another truth the novel shows you. As a concept it is nothing new, but the execution is interesting. And love the name, Jo. It actually fking makes sense in this story.

sharrnister
sharrnisterLv2sharrnister

I love the way you describe the current situation and your writing style, the story too is interesting. Character designs is done so well! Keep up the good work, Author! Ps. I'll wait for your review on mine ;)

123removed
123removedLv1123removed

I haven't yet finished all chapters, but I wanted to leave you a review! I like your style, you're good with telling things between the lines. Sure, there are a few typos, but everybody makes those. It's a really nice and easy-to-read story, and I'm curious to know where it will go from here 😄

Whendhie1
Whendhie1Lv3Whendhie1

Oh oh. The worst thing you could do is make a bet when you are drunk... It never ends well. 😁😁 I love the plot of this novel... I'm sure I'm going to enjoy reading more chapters ❤️

GenXPrays
GenXPraysLv3GenXPrays

We would take it as a manual of: "... from pursuing his dreams, he decided to stop being a perfectionist." How many today start something and then leave it? Instead of accelerating all the time to stop short, it is better to go slow. Are they with you? ... they will thank you. The book reminds us that with such perfection, many mistakes have been overcome, but never all.?

TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3TofSpades

Amazing novel, extremely underrated! The writing style is great and the world building is second to none. Hats off to the author for the great novel! Keep it up!

Megana4
Megana4Lv2Megana4

So far the story is interesting and loves the flow of the story. Very promising characters. The writing style is remarkable. This book has great potential to reach great heights. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!