Kaeso
the story is not bad even if the chapters are a little short you can see that the author has tried, there are various grammar errors, but the plot is good even if for the moment nothing concrete has been done except travel a bit, I hope the author continues that this story has good potential although I think the levels are too easy for both players and him
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