a nice story but its updated very randomish not sure if the next chapter will drop tomorrow in a week ore maby in a month putting that aside for a short story it is good

I guss its a good start but nit sure where the story is going to lead to so definitly can't wait to find out especialy about the main character

Nice story but not sure were it will lead to which is i guess a good thing thought the Mc would just be a strong player so what happened to him was suprising hope theres more suprises for usup the aouthors sleves