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the only reason to be an incubus is his looks because because he doesn't use racial powers at all because he's a nice guy, so what's the use of being an incubus if he fights in a totally different way with his fists? It is in the title is your career and is not relevant to the plot? And according to his race it is affecting him to make it more violent but he spends his time being cupid joining couples everywhere God is a high incubus they are lustful as well but in that it does not affect his race and he is cupid everywhere he goes
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would've been good if he wasn't being a matchmaker for a character i dont care about, is he the god of kindness and love or something? mc only got like 2 monster girls yet you made him start in that world like hes gonna be pokehunting. wish he was actually an incubus, mc should change his race to cupids spawnπ
I totally recommend this story. I find it really entertaining and so far, the interactions between the characters in my opinion are spot on. The author has really captured the personalities of the characters from their anime worlds and I'm looking forward to the progression. So far the MC has these op skills, it would be nice to see him use them, I can understand the lemon π skills, they must be passive like his charm. I'm wondering if he has the capacity to target an enemy with them and sexually enduse them. If he can do this I think it should only be used on enemies as if uses on nice characters it might spoil it. But overall loving the work. Please keep it up.
I'm loving this fanfic. Unlike some people, it doesn't bother me that the MC reveals that he is a demon and is from another world. Why would it matter when the people of that world don't even pose a threat? My only problem, sometimes it even stresses me out, is that he uses a lot of "after all" in every paragraph. I'm not good at English, so I had to rely on the translator.
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the story is not bad just that the author keeps making time jumps every 5-10 chapters and ruins the whole story, the statistics are confusing (almost useless) and the system is omnipotent from so op skills that not even the mc knows how they work or because, even if he is an incubus he is like a normal person and nothing changes, the interactions with the characters are unclear and not very detailed or skipped, the author continues to skip important pieces of the plot and suddenly mc and the characters they get along well, it doesn't even seem to read a complete story but it seems to read only the beginning and the end, mc has an armor where he replaces mc of that world for no reason or because, even the characters of some characters are different from the canon, even some powers have changed for no reason, beautiful story but the author needs to work harder
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