Review Detail of AlexVv_Gamer in Task System of the Incubus

I'm loving this fanfic. Unlike some people, it doesn't bother me that the MC reveals that he is a demon and is from another world. Why would it matter when the people of that world don't even pose a threat? My only problem, sometimes it even stresses me out, is that he uses a lot of "after all" in every paragraph. I'm not good at English, so I had to rely on the translator.