Reviews of Tales of the Dragon Mortal

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I'm sorry, but your spelling isn't too good, as you have very long sentences that sometimes cross paragafs. It's an interesting idea, with lots of potential but the spelling kinda ruins it. Some spelling mistakes are hilarious though, like: a dark shaded short hair man. Makes it sound like he's just a man made out of hair. It made me laugh.

Just read the initial chapter of the book and I was immediately hooked. I'm not a fan of fantasy but your story kept me on my toes. I'm pretty sure even the rest of the book is going to keep me on the edge. Would definitely recommend it to others. Keep it up Author!!

The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is excellent and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .[img=recommend][img=update]

I liked this one quite a bit. Although I didnt like how the grammar is kind of. I’m not sure but the grammar is pretty messed up when I tead it and it’s a little hard to read at times, since I cant really pinpoint where the story is going.

The writing is fine I would say since I could understand what's written. But it could be made interesting by creating a flow of words. The grammar issue is pointed out by others could be improved. The updates look stable. As someone who cares about quality than quantity, it doesn't matter to me. The story development is fine but the flow of pace if maintained would be better, like during the character introduction and stuff. The character design could use some work. Take the characters with the story flow... is what I would say. The world background is fine, just go with the flow and don't create many info dumps :) Overall, a good start... good luck :)

The novel is to my liking. The character interaction was quite fun to ready with lex being bitter too much. Lmao, I hope you'll be able to continue this work and with a little improvement in the grammar department would truly polish this Novel into a fine gem.

As a person who played Skyrim this absolutely loves dragons and dragon powers I can say that this book is pretty damn great and fun to get with and read!

good plot but got bad translation/grammar. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗,

Good new story! Keeps me fantasize for dragon and titans! It's a fresh fantasy plot and keep me wondering what the next story will be. Waiting for next chapter.

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Interesting read, has a few grammer issues, but hey don't we all. Even with the grammer issues the book is understandable and has a fairly well thought out plot. Keep up the good work.

The story is quite interesting one. The character's background created by you is nice especially of the protagonist. If you remove the grammatical mistakes then will showcase your novel's views in much better way.

I kinda feel this story have a LOTR-vibe. A warrior, dragon, a guild. But this story tell us a new fantasy world. So keep up the updates. Yeah.

Story is nice and you can tell that the this is author first kind of story or genre. the more you read, the more the story unveil. Im cheering the writer/author, hang in there. Don't give up.

Always the best!! keep writing and I wish this to reach the peak and keep being loved forever. This book is awesome with all the fav and interesting chapters! Don't give up and keep going! I will always support! Borahae💜💜❤❤

very interesting.. can't wait to read again n again.. hope author gets more a lot of tension that is good n cool... 👏👏👏👏👏😁😁😁👏👏👏👏 ciayoo!! n good jobb..

Knights ? Elves ? Damn I love it already. Putting together how you relay your stories to the reader, it make people easy to read. Keep up a good work, loving it !

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I really liked reading the story...its a new experience n the character development is lovely...the updates r constant...i recommend this book to all