Raikyodeus
Hi there everyone, Author here. Would just like to take a moment to thank everyone who's decided to start reading my novel. Really loving the feedback I'm starting to get and I welcome you to continue letting me know what you think! I've seen my novel go from a handful of readers to almost 1000 in just one month and it feels really good to see that so many of you are taking the time out of your days to read my little story. I work really hard to produce this stuff, but without you all, it wouldn't mean much. So seriously thank you so much, you have my deepest gratitude. For now, I'll leave it here. But I look forward to continuing to entertain all of you in the coming weeks and months! Oh, and there's a discord if you'd like to join! Hope to see you around. Peace for now.~ https://discord.gg/NaSGaqM
The Writing Quality has been good till now(chapter 7), only the names of places and characters have been difficult. The Updates have been steady, chapters are very long and I feel like Author-san can shorten them here. Story has been developing nicely even though there are several unnecessary details at random. Characters are still getting fleshed out, will wait and see World Building hasn't been done much but the MC doesn't know about the world a lot either so it can be excused for now. Will update after reading more. Keep up the good work author, and readers do check this novel out.
This is one of the great ones, would definitely recommend. The plot starts slow and may leave you wanting for details, but quickly makes up for it. The breadcrumbs of mysterious lore will keep you sucked in and itching to learn more. The world building is solid and the characters are well-developed. The author explains events and concepts well, without giving too much away. The power system has a proper amount of complexity and balance. The MC of the story kind of falls under the "chosen one" archetype, and is given a bit of plot armour, but it's not horribly unreasonable or extensive. Grammatical/punctuational errors are sparse, and those that can be found don't affect readability. Overall, this novel has great potential. The writing is of good quality, the story is interesting, and the world feels real. 8/10 would definitely recommend.
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