Reviews of Sweet Surrender: The CEO's Second Wife

This certainly as surprise. A story set in the Philippines.. That'd explain some of the few English ticks that I spotted. TL:DR for the review: It's great, but would benefit greatly from a remaster. Criticism time. Story and pacing is fairly done, no problem there. Dialogue however, feels a tad bit stiff at times. Might want to make it feel more natural with just a wee bit more contraction usage. (ie: 'I'm' instead of 'I am') Grammar could also use some polishing, and there are times where there's just one giant block of dialogue with no stopping in between. Break those up with a dash a descriptive writing. Describe their cadence, their tone, as they're doing their monologue to spice things up. That's it I guess. Great effort. Keep on keeping on 👍

What a nice family read, I love all the characters, the turns and twists so far. Its a wow one for me and I will recommend for family and friends always

Cant wait for clara know that john was her husband son. I hope that clara never forgive her husband because he do the wrong thing for cheating but the worst part is he let her wife raise his son without knowing the truth, and after his mistress want to reconcile with their son he immediately just tell john the truth as if it's not a big deal. How can be hector be so cruel. I really hate him. I wish he will get miserable life.

hey lizabelle8 y did u killed alex character... for me he's main lead hero .atleast he should stay with his son & daughter in law ..you are so cruel author ...

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I love everything about this story, kept me at the edge, inquisitive of what gonna happen next. But don't like how the last part is turned out that Mikey baby slept with that girl arrrggghhh ... Horrible. I hope Caroline Revenges with Alex

nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished

Very nice novel, started reading it like 2 months ago and it has been captivating. At first I thought it was going to be a short story when Caroline got married to Mike but at the long run many things started unfolding making the write-up full of twists and thereby creating a very interesting and sound novel for tireless readers. The author has done a really good job in keeping up with the novel chapter by chapter and updating the readers in time

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Writter weldone. The story is good so far but sometimes the mix up that you bring makes us the readers confused. It is taught provoking novel that makes the reader tensed and anxious to read next chapter. But in general you are really doing well. Thank you