SleepDeprivedSloth
This novel is really good but I just have one problem, what happened to the system because it seems the system is dead, since he has not gotten any mission since the early chapter even the daily mission, it was supposed to be a harem god system but all we have been seeing is Hal being a gigolo so he can become a king.
Don't get me wrong, this novel is good. The reason of my 2.6 star review is because this story is your typical system slave MC. Also, the cultivation system is so simple where each stages didn't give the cultivator something unique other than more powerful and more chi/mana quantity. Someone in the lower stages can defeat those in higher stages as long as someone have a overpowered skill. Higher stages just seem worthless if you have trashy skill sets.
For a Sloth, Author is awfully dedicated to his Novel, Not minding and even willing to hear out and understand it's readers/audience opinions, He is very interactive and would even warn readers before doing anything mahor like changing a thing about the novel. If the author is likeable, surely it means their work reflects it and it undoubtedly does. Keep up the good work Mahdude 🤙
Love the novel so far... The MC knows what he wants and does it... The system is not the almighty one that ends up dictating the life of the MC most of the time... The only negative is the points hording... I find it better and understandable for an MC to invest points during his downtime so he can adapt to his own strength...
Hello to you who cared to read my Review first I would like to first give you a review on the MC , our MC is someone with handsome looks , Oscar level acting skills and an equally sadistic personality well at least from that i felt till now, The characters till now are not bad, they seem to have some backstory behind them which I appreciate but the chapters are really short honestly it doesn't seem like we are getting extra's just chapters who make up the length hope for the cultural chapter's they would not be shortened as we only have 14 chapters as i am writing the review the story have not had any mind blowing progress and it is pretty chill with the MC being a Toy Boy and hiding for now and so far for the world development we know that the kingdom the MC has reincarnated into has 3 princes and 4 dukes waiting to handover their women..
No doubt a good spicy novel. The only thing that urks me and it is not only this novel but that insecure people didnt like the yuri scene and then throws hissy fit. After that the author caves in and never touch it. I wonder how many people has a problem with woman on woman action to force the author to change the novel. Are they in the majority?
honest review : it is little perverted but it's good. 2.characters looks lovely. 3.storytelling is also good. 4.author really knows how to keep readers think what will come next. 5.writing quality and grammar is good. 6.mc is not naive which is good thing and also f leads arent like bots. 7.Interaction between characters is good. 8.I like conquer type harem op mc novels so giving it 5 stars