John_Doever
I think this story had potential, but the problem is that the main character has been turned into a simp slave who can't help but act as the hero. He is not a true villain or fake villain, but rather a hero, which disgusts me. The author seems obsessed with adding chains to the protagonist, such as humanity, friendship, good, evil, and love. This is just filler, and only trash authors use it. Sometimes, I feel like the only decent novel on this platform is Greed: All for what, as nearly all true villain authors either stop or leave.
I rarely, if ever, write reviews on here. But if i didn't, i would feel like i was depriving the world of something absolutely beautiful. This book isn't perfect. It has flaws, and sometimes the characters dont get something important explained about them until it randomly pops up later, but thats not even close to stopping how fantastic this story is. i have read SO many of these types of story, and they all feel like something is missing. pacing is off, and the characters seem a bit flat... not here. This story has some of the absolute best emotional development and consistency that I have ever seen. Every time the character makes a decision, I feel myself preparing to be let down like most books do, but im always wrong. All the characters emotions are extremely well stuck to, and they make the decisions of the characters make a ton of sense, and when they dont, they still do and are quickly explained and you see their thought process. And I wont spoil things, but relationships, pacing, all the major things that make a story great are all here is spades. Thank you for gracing us with this story, author.
The Novels Pretty Cool. A Necromancer In The World Of Superheroes? An Uncommon Concept But Not Rare. Though This Does Have A Really Good Execution Of It. Like Some Fleshy Entity With A Gelatinous Supercomputer And A Bone Inner-Exoskeleton Said "There Are No Bad Concepts Only Bad Executions" Or Something Like That. I Mean If Someone Can Make Shooting Superpowers Slugs Out Of Nerf Blasters An Interesting And Actually Unironically Good Show Then We'll This Should Be Fuvking Good. Though I Am Still Waiting For AES To Get Updated... Like All Of The Other Discord Members. Like Bro, I Think We Are Literally Becoming Insane And Caniballistic Every Single Passing Hour After Checking And Seeing AES Not Getting Updated. I Want It- No, I. NEED. IT.
One of the best books in this entire app, hands down. The lore and ExplanAtion behind everything is deep and well written. Things dont just happen bc of unexplainable magic or things of That sort. This could be a whole comic book universe on its own, or even create a spin-off with all the well designed characters the author created. 100% worth a try, completely different and original from the typical “system” novels youll read. One thing tho, plot development is slow af. Spending close to 100 chapters on a single arc is way too much...
I love the fact that you turned someone who had the potential to be one of the greatest heroes in the world and turned him into a somewhat villain. He might actually be a villain. Idk, the appeal of someone cracking and finally realizing that they are gonna have to get their hands dirty to get what they want really makes this novel interesting
The usual tropes are present in here, but they are nicely utilized and though cliche, it is still an enjoyable read. I especially like that there is no drama between the girl in his harem. Stella is a cool tomboy, Val is a devoted dere, and so on, they don't clash and they mesh well. All in all, I love it. Also.
I have currently read all 236 chapters of this webnovel I have been reading for a while and have been reading webnovel in general for a while and I must say this novel is easily withings my top 3 potentially my number one of novels on this site without even considering the consistent and constant uploads of chapters the main character is well fleshed out and his thought process is explained well and makes sense for what hes been through I would reccomend reccomend sticking through the first part like the entire inside the school arc because after that if when things get really good . people may say I overrated it but I honestly cant fault any of the novel as it stands the author may have not been as good at the very beginning hut overall this is a fantastic novel with great background. amazing updating stability. great characters. a good paced story. and very good writing quality the only complaint I have is sometimes the author will extend parts of the story to build suspense etc but for a little too long mainly I mean when we were getting to his real revenge I'll say since I dont wanna spoil .
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