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Star Wars:The cold red eyes

{A Star Wars Fanfiction} This story is following a Chiss boy growing up at the times of the New republic. This is going to be kinda AU Fanfiction some ideas of my fantasy some of kanon stuff and some legends stuff so don't wonder. I look forward to suggestions for improvement and constructive criticism. DISCLAIMER: •I do not own anything only my oc. •If there is any problem about the cover please send me a message i'll delte it. •I have a very bad spelling and i'll mostly use the translater so pls blame me not this much. •This is my first Fanfiction and i'm not 100% sure if i going to keep up writing. •Don't expect regular updates i do it because i'm bored.

Erdzan_21 · Sci-fi
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Chapter 10

(Message for readers who are actively following this story.

I decided to make Dato a bit older so i "brought forward" his birth by 3 years, so don't be surprised why the year numbers have changed.

In case you're a little confusedconfused i'm going to tell you the new dates that have changes.

Dato was born in year 3269 according to the lothal calendar and 8 years BBY.

He entered the academy in the year 3273 or 5 years BBY.

I hope you understood and now have fun with the fanfiction.)

Dato POV

Year 3273 lothal calendar

Planet:Csilla, Csplar

When I heard those words and heard him say it I immediately stood up and looked on the holo blackboard in front of me.

The adult slowly walks forward step by step and speaks in an authoritarian tone

"My name is not important, what is important is that unit Alpha-3 was assigned to me and I will accompany you in your basic training"

Now that he was standing in front of us, he looked deep into our faces with a grim expression

"From now on you will address me as commander or sir, my command is for you law and if i notice once that you don't obey my command you will all bear the consequences."

'He talks so calm but is so scary' I think the sight of the commander

"From now on you are cadets of unit Alpha-3 understand?" He asks and expects an answer.

"YES SIR" We say it out loud together

"First of all, I want everyone to say their name, we go from left to right so start"

the commander orders us.

Uzui turns to the rest of us and says "My name is you can call me Uzui nice to meet you"

"Next one" Says the commander shortly

I stand up and speak "My name is Jlurd'aluwo'tosago in short Dato, i hope for good cooperation in the future" I end up with a loving smile

"Go on"

"Remm'eigho'tosago or Mei is my name"says the shy girl next to me

"Next"

My name is Clish'anntoa'tosago you can call me by my core name Hanna" Says the other girl neutrally

"I think it's my turn?" The boy on the left asks humourous

"Right cadet, start now" says the commander annoyed by this behavior

"Hello everyone, my name is Nlatt'aron'tosago or simply Taron I can only look towards a good cooperation in the future as Dato said already" Taron says in a friendly tone

Nice, now that we all know each other I will give a short speech after the speech you can ask questions, now sit down and listen" he says without anger or tension.

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That's it. I would appreciate feedback and a few power stones to motivate myself to drop some more stuff.

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That's it. I would appreciate feedback and a few power stones to motivate myself to drop some more stuff.

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