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I was recommended this novel on Facebook and had never read a web novel before that. Personally, I loved the story but I just wanted something darker and a little more twisted. It's not that there was anything wrong with it. It's just that I'm more into dark romance and steamy stuff. This novel inspired me to write my first novel, "The New Toy" and I will always be grateful for that. Thank you for inspiring me to become an author!
I love the story plot. They are not repetitive like other novels. Every important character has it's own story and the suspense precise and unpredictable. Story is unique as well. I love how the other intertwined the characters lives and how well she covers love, drama, comedy, action together without over doing them. Kudos for the author!
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This story was written very well! I saw the story on a Facebook add where they're often poorly written just to get attention and even if they sound ok I typically do not pay to read the rest of them. This one was so much better than the others! The characters developed well throughout the story, the timelines made sense, the writing/grammar was consistent. The story did end a little quickly, but it was a good ending and tied up all of the loose ends of the story. Once I started reading I couldn't stop and I read the entire story in a couple of hours. Definitely would recommend!
Author has a very good command of language and conveys images and emotions well. I’m very impressed with the plot, especially the backstory. The length of the story fit just right. (Some stories feel like they are being dragged out without actually moving the story forward.) Overall, an excellent piece of fiction.😁