This story was written very well! I saw the story on a Facebook add where they're often poorly written just to get attention and even if they sound ok I typically do not pay to read the rest of them. This one was so much better than the others! The characters developed well throughout the story, the timelines made sense, the writing/grammar was consistent. The story did end a little quickly, but it was a good ending and tied up all of the loose ends of the story. Once I started reading I couldn't stop and I read the entire story in a couple of hours. Definitely would recommend!