AngelLily
G'day mates! Pretty good writing, but there are a few times where differed word usage would fit better. For example, in the first chapter, "The doctor pinched between his brow and raised his head to look at the young girl, however, he was furiously shoved out of the way by the young girl." I wouldn't recommend using the same name/pronoun for a character in the same sentence. The same goes for a few sentences later, where "corpse" is used twice in the same sentence. As of chapter 7, the book is pretty good! (Not a spoiler, occurs in the first chapter). I think that Leia's reaction to her mother's demise was pretty unexpected and interesting, and it kept me hooked on reading further into the story. This one is worth bookmarking and checking back in on to read when there are more chapters :)
Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. She will escape, right? But, how? Will the alpha help her escape? Or, will she escape on her own? I am growing curious. And, I would love to see her father's regret. I want to know more about the connection between her mother and her father. Did I miss something? I usually read fast. I didn't understand why she is so sure about her father is the culprit. If I missed it, then please do tell me, I will reread those chapters. And if I haven't then author, you need to update more.
First chapter in and yet the story is already this depressing... I love the writing style of the author, it's very clean and precise with no unnecessary words added. I couldn't say much about the setting or the characters as they weren't mentioned that much in the first chap, however, what I could say is that his father is the typical kind of scum you could see in other novels or manhwas. This, however, made the character of his father quite bland, in my opinion. That's all, I think? Anyways, Good Luck and Keep up the Good Work Author!
The story's writing is decent. But the story's narrative lacks any excitement that might inspire the reader's enthusiasm. makes one want to stop reading the book in the middle. When reading a novel, unless it is comedic (which this is not), people must be able to hunger for more of the storylines (wanting to know what will happen next). In other words, this is just my own perspective, and I can only speak for myself based on my experience reading more than 100 novels, which I greatly enjoy doing.
A strong female lead we got here. Ah I love the stories with strong and independent fls. Read onya few chapters so far but I wish she stays that way. The good thing is that ML too seems to be good until now. Grammatical errors minimilisatic so far. A great read for those who like to read werewolf stories. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What I like about this novel is that the main heroine is not someone passive and timid. She is a strong-willed person ready to act and get the things she wants by herself, however hard it might be. Leia's life is not easy, and as a result, she is a tough young woman. That makes her relationship dynamic with the werewolf alpha, who is a dominating ruler by nature, more interesting. The writing itself has room for improvement, but it delivers everything it needs to deliver, while the story itself has a lot of twists and turns. Another thing is that evil characters are really, really hateful, which makes you really want to see them get what they deserve. The author did a good job!