I like the story where there isn't always a good ending. A tons of people relive their life in hurtful and unfair way. This is quite the reminder that we're lucky, but also telling us a story of the side on those who are unlucky. Currently, in some countries of conflicts, attacks which cause death of our loves ones might have nothing to do with us, or even us couldn't do a thing to that. It... just kinda happened, like the story depicted here.
However I must tell, while I like the plot, I think the "shortness" of the story itself might be the wall between nicely paced and emotionally deep immersion to a feeling of "rush-ness" or, as I'd like to say "skipping a beat". Some part of the story, where I think the love and care could be developed more, should last longer, detailed, intriguing, and have a strong impact to the reader's heart. Also there might be some grammatical error that should be an easy fix (I'm not insisting on everybody to have a perfect grammar, but it would be nice if our immersion weren't broken by that).
If the writer like'd a suggestion. May I give some point of possible constructive new approach? Firstly, try give a background in "shedding a light" manner. Those attack might have a reasoning, and it could be revealed when the main antagonist appeared. Secondly, a nice way to tell if something is "bad" or "good" is simply by not telling at all if someone is a good guy or a bad guy. Just let the story reveal itself. Thirdly, instead of writing exactly what the characters are felt at the time, try tell us what they actually spoke at that moment, this really enhance the immersion and would work the best at short stories like this one.
Either way, those are only suggestions and critics. The implementation--while in theory they might give positive impact--might not be as easy as it sounds, and it might destroy or at least damage the story. So, bravo, and I hope you can keep making more and better stories in the future!
