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I usually don't read horror stories because I am a certified scrady cat, but this collection of shorts stories has me wanting more! Each story has me at the edge of my seat and although I get terrified I just can't help but want to read more. The author has a way of brining the characters and scenes to life. Would definitely recommend to those who love reading horror, you would not be disappointed.
Damn, read to chapter 8 and that's all there is for now. This is a good fun read that delivers exactly what it promises. The stories - although there's only been two so far - are short, snappy and straight to the point. Quite creepy two. Particularly enjoying the set up of the second story and I look forward to reading its ending. Well-written, excellent pacing and full marks for enjoyment. Horror is a difficult genre to write in, but this author knows what they're doing and certainly delivers on the premise.
I know its a book of short horror stories but I think they are more on the action end than scary! Coming from someone who binges horror movies and stories I think the author can build the suspense more and tease the readers with if the character will survive or not. The plot lines and story itself is very good so just think with a bit of polishing it will truly be a fantastic read! Keep writing!
Another horror novel, it's nice to see more authors writing these types of novels. Bonus points for being an anthology it seems. It's simple, easy to understand and it doesn't bother you with details too much. Admittedly, some instances of awkward grammar or word choices appear, eventhough I clearly understand the message. But if you look past them, you can still enjoy the story. Keeping working on it author. You're doing good so far.
I really enjoyed reading this and I commend you as a fellow thriller writer. A few edits need to be made here and there and there's a method to the suspense. Use senses, emotions to incite fear and anxiety in your readers. You actually did that but the first story seemed a bit prolonged as we were waiting for the creature to do something for a long while but it was awesome nonetheless.😉