May1st
Thanks author, you got all my attention! Really different type of writing, and storyline is too engaging and captivating. The female lead is in the body of her double, and vice versa, they both realize it and are trying to do all in other to return to their main body. But they are having fun while achieving this.
I have read eight chapters till now. 2 dopplegangers switched souls? I have already added in my library π it's a unique plot in transmigration and I love the pacing and development until now. I have to read more to know how Olivia would be dealing in Emma's body π Apart from a little grammar issues that can be easily fixed with editing, the story is going great! π Keep it up Author and good luck! β€οΈ
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Firstly this book had a catchy title and thatβs what got me started. Storyline is very interesting and there has been steady progress of the two different characters and also very good approach of trying to keep them practical. I like how both characters understand the others circumstances little by little. The author has been doing a good job of keeping the suspense and the story going interesting.
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I barely do reviews for books but the first time reading of May's novel, the doppelgangers got me. So will do here.βπ»π First, story developments is nice. The characters of Olivia and Emma have their own story to tell, likely look the same person but have different personality. ππ» Still debating if I like Olivia or not because the way her character shows somewhat kind of badbooty or crazybooty, haha. For Emma, she is the opposite and trying to have some confidence. Updates, character design, and backgrounds are good. No issues with that~ ππ» Then lastly, the writing: The writing quality is either good or bad, it's in the grey area. It just need some pointers of the grammars, errors, and structures which I think Author May will do her best to improve of writing. By reading it through half of the chapters, I actually enjoy the story and made me laugh for 15 mins. It is probably the way Author wrote made to read it hilariously, even though it must be the struggle how it writes. Lastly, will say, it is 100% understandable of mistakes that how the Author wrote. Nobody is perfect, keep it up, May. β€ Go add this in your library and vote to show support! Promise you that it's worth the read, just please bare the Author's writing style and try to understand it. Thanks for sharing your story, May, and (late) congrats on third place! ππ
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