VynDahl
Best story ever literally in my top 3 Here is a joke A king says he will marry his Daughter to the man who brought him the most pingpong balls. Three man took the challenge The first man came with a big bucket of pingpong balls and the kings says wait till the rest come back. The second man brings a huge sack of pingpong balls and the king says wait. 5 months later... The third man comes and gives the king to small sacks and the king was pissed and said this is all you the pingpong balls you could find!!! The third man said pingpong balls I THOUGHT YOU SAID KING KONGS BALLS. HE THEN COMMITED SODOKU
First chapter already loving it hope to see more of my favorite characters being interactive with each other πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Hahaha so far so great my man! Love the fact that you made our monkey protagonist be a battle monger. Also punching Zod as soon as he met him was damn genius. Dear lord I can already see the future with The Master making plans, Zod trying to use those plans to rule the world, and Kel completely ruining those plans cuz he just wants to βfk sht up.β The Unholy Trinity. Lol anyway you decide to go, Iβll support ya. Just the scope of the world alone should be commended. Also canβt wait to see how their futures develop with so many unstable elements already mixed together.
Good novel But you need to explain some stuff. For example why is there a hunter exam you have cosmic level beings roaming around why do you need a hunter license. And who's the protagonist (the sayan?) You need to expand a bit. Other than the lack of explanation (I think you are going to explain in the future) it is a novel with a huge potential
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