only thing you need to work on is conveying characters emotions. otherwise this s reslky good story. Grammar isn't bad. this seems like a solid story with potential
its a blatant copy of vampire system but just better but still a copy copy copy copy copyc copy of the chon so I can play it is the best price you'll get a quest game
really in depth character development. not predictable at all. no serious cliches. logical bit still enjoyable mc. after chapter 20 it skyrockets in enjoyablility. in my top 3 ln this app rn[img=exp]