Lruska
Hey this my review so here we go: Actually it's on of the best novels I've ever read its not to fast nor no to slow romance is awesome the part where he's with his family is also a very nice part to read and about Nora I don't know if the author read this but this is my opinion and nothing more I think Nora also deserve the love of Luan cause after so many years she's still in love with him and stayed loyal to him in which case something that very rare to see I hope she to live with Luan and of course Ingrid because 3 of them deserves it
I really enjoy this story, however i had to drop it quite a while ago because i was all caught up as far as i could and the release rate is too slow. I enjoy their other stories as well but with the large work load something has to give and that would be the slow release rates for this story as well as their others. now I’m back to binge the new chapters!
Look, the novel is fine, but it sucks that every so often it tries to hide, whether it's erasing people's memories for such simple things, or simply telling others not to say anything, and above all for things that don't even have to to do with the cultivation, it is not for nothing but that it is hidden only makes the novel boring. In addition, the characters tend to draw conclusions without any foundation, which makes them irritable and annoying, and finally, I come with the premise of an apocalypse novel, but I don't know how many chapters I have to wait for it to start, almost 100 chapters and nothing has happened, in addition to zero interesting plots.
This story is great and quite entertaining dear author, keep it up. In my opinion you shouldn't make her a harem - because the genre isn't really to my liking. I feel sorry for Nora for all the time I've searched and tried to find Luan over the years. But many times, even if you have been loving and yearning for a person for years, it does not mean that the other person will have reciprocal feelings for you. The truth is that I really like the couple Ingrid and Luan, it would be a bit shocking for me the integration of an additional person in this case Nora. I would suggest that you make Nora manage to resign herself and she can turn the page. Because maybe he just didn't stop loving and waiting for Luan due to the fact that he died unexpectedly and he couldn't have closure in their relationship which at that point was <ambiguous> because according to Luan himself he had already resigned himself to his love for her as a woman and changed it to love her as a sister. So if he can do it... so can she. And according to what I read, it seems that Luan has a friend/rival from her old life... you could make Nora fall in love with him over time since, according to what was implied, he already reached the seventh order and to be a rival of Luan must be someone incredibly powerful. So out there there might be a chance that Nora finds her happy ending. That's my honest opinion and it's not like I expect you to take it into account. Removing the #harem or #noharem... I really like your story. You have talent keep writing and bringing your ideas to life. 😍✨
At the beginning of the novel, I was anticipating that this novel would be great but lord, it later had so many issues. There were so many unimportant plots, so many scenes that could have been skipped. I mean the author decided to bring forward the third awakening but he could have just time skipped or skipped some parts like... How many times will the employees be envious of Ingrid, the romance between Ingrid and Luan is too much ( how many times must they say " I love you") , and how many family problems are we going to see. I'm complaining cos I'm in chapter 159 now, and it's prolly going to take 200 chapters just for the 3rd awakening. and a lot of useless conversations. I'll just stop there tho, I hope it gets better, at least I'll wait till the 3rd awakening.