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This story is great and quite entertaining dear author, keep it up. In my opinion you shouldn't make her a harem - because the genre isn't really to my liking. I feel sorry for Nora for all the time I've searched and tried to find Luan over the years. But many times, even if you have been loving and yearning for a person for years, it does not mean that the other person will have reciprocal feelings for you. The truth is that I really like the couple Ingrid and Luan, it would be a bit shocking for me the integration of an additional person in this case Nora. I would suggest that you make Nora manage to resign herself and she can turn the page. Because maybe he just didn't stop loving and waiting for Luan due to the fact that he died unexpectedly and he couldn't have closure in their relationship which at that point was <ambiguous> because according to Luan himself he had already resigned himself to his love for her as a woman and changed it to love her as a sister. So if he can do it... so can she. And according to what I read, it seems that Luan has a friend/rival from her old life... you could make Nora fall in love with him over time since, according to what was implied, he already reached the seventh order and to be a rival of Luan must be someone incredibly powerful. So out there there might be a chance that Nora finds her happy ending. That's my honest opinion and it's not like I expect you to take it into account. Removing the #harem or #noharem... I really like your story. You have talent keep writing and bringing your ideas to life. 😍✨

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