Evernightlord
Yes yes yes!! This is story telling at its finest for sure π . The build up in this story has you on edge at times also just how op can kai get. Legendary. Really hope for the sake of the joy I get from reading this story that it continues. Worthy of two power stones..reading marathon with only 6 hrs sleep in 3 days. Every waking hour reading this incredible work of genius. Would have awarded a 5 star π but some words are muddled eg. Take and talk but aside from that you got love this story . Cultivation, magic ancient ruins, OP Mc and sub party.
I have been following the story when it only had fifty chapter and had seen the writing style of the author evolving as well as the character development. The starting part of the story is little rush but it's gets better with each character. It has been a great story and look forward to what is going to happen next in great magic world. Keep of the good work and release faster if possible.
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This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
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This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
I was drawn into the due how smooth everything was and how reasonable it was but after finding out that mc basically can't have any children just cause he awakened his bloodline it was kinda like a buzz plus I saw harem and r-18 In tags so I don't know if I want to continue or not cause honestly I don't see the point of being in a relationship with multiple girls if you can't have children it just seems to like that'll be boring like for all that he might as well put all his focus on getting stronger