Love Douban
I think the quality of this book is really good and I like it I put most of the stuff at 4 star though only cause it's not 100 chapters yet and we'll can't really tell how far this booms gonna go so I will rewrite reveiw as soon as there's more than 100 chapters cause I don't know if this book is gonna last that long I've seen a lot of new booms flip arround chapter 80 or the author discontinued writing but hope you continue and hope the twins get a lot of story and background added to them...
Wowwowowo, just wonderful. When I first started reading I thought it was interesting but now Indirectly finished all the chapters before knowing how much time pass by. Author-san, this work is superb, I liked how the story progressed, the characters development and the style of system. All of them are great so keep it that way, so please don't change your writing style. Keep up good work, I am waiting for more chapters... Thank your for making me feel inspiration for my own work which I will writing in a few weeks....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Started off like a decent enough story that you'd read to kill time. The usual face slapping and plot convenience of system/draw novels. But past chapter 500 it goes downhill fast. Dropped it after the cultivation bs changed the novel. Character design took a huge hit. Went from a 3.5 star story to a trash 1 star novel.
I have read a total of 411 chapters of this novel, and contrary to some negative reviews, I found it to be quite enjoyable. While it does fall into the cliché of a face-slapping Chinese novel, it isn't as bad as I initially anticipated. One aspect that I didn't particularly like was the MC building a harem while having a girlfriend, but I must admit that the female characters in the harem are not poorly portrayed, which is why I can overlook this aspect. Additionally, the encounters with second-generation young masters, whom the MC defeats with his immense wealth and power, become less bothersome once they are no longer present in the story. It was refreshing to see some second-generation young masters actually become friends with the MC, which is quite rare in this genre. The MC is portrayed as a super genius due to his acquisition of skills from the red, silver, and golden packets, which was expected. Furthermore, he possesses great power, but thankfully, the story has not delved into unnecessary martial arts and cultivation elements, which is a plus. The world-building is not extensive, following a more classic approach, as the MC changes the 'Hua Nation' with his inventions, but he does acknowledge and give credit to those who inspired him by including them as co-authors in his thesis. I appreciate that the story avoids noticeable nationalism and racism, with any references to different skin colors being the only potential issue for some readers. The translation quality is commendable, as I never struggled to understand any sentences. Both the MC and the harem members are likable characters, although there are a few who are not given as much focus for some reason. The red packets and later the 'Sign in' system, which the MC gains after leveling up, do make his wealth and power quite absurd, but they also contribute to the convenience of the story. Overall, if you are looking for something to pass the time, this novel is a decent choice.
If you can stand the nationalism nonsense, it's not half bad solid 3.5/5. Other than a ridiculous harem, it does keep to its main theme, which is outstanding considering the competition. There are surprisingly few grammatical errors considering that the main character has 'flawless' comprehension of the English language but refuses to speak it, simply because it's not Hua...