Lu_Shui
Just me supporting my first work :) Hi everyone, I am a new author in this site. I wrote a lot of fanfics before, but never an original story. Truthfully I am really nervous because when writing an original story it seems that there are so many things to think about! Hahaha. Anyway, if you do enjoy the story, welcome and I hope you enjoy your stay. Otherwise I would love to hear feedbacks for my improvement :)
Wow, I'm blown away! The story has a captivating plot. It's almost as if you're seeing it because the writer done such a good job with the descriptions. I'm looking forward to finishing the book. The grammar is excellent. Xiao Yue and Long Zhao Feng will, without a doubt, fall in love. I'm still convinced that the shaman the root of the misunderstanding and plotting against them. Regardless, I am eager to complete this book, which I highly recommend.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
Xiao Yue's antics at the start of the novel are quite comical and very human. We start to bond with the character more as we see the world through her eyes. As the novel progresses, it gets more serious. We start to empathize with our heroine and relate to her struggles. After the first chapter I knew I was in good hands. This book has plenty of drama, magic, mystery, humor and romance to keep any reader satisfied, so give it a chance you won’t regret it!