Dark_Crow1111
This novel started out interesting for me, but it became frustrating due to certain things, like the fact that his physique is the same despite the magic, and that it's hard to be told over and over again that he didn't have noticeable muscles every time a part was shown. his body, also incredibly annoying that they screw over and over and over again with the fact that he is a student, look, I have read novels with young protagonists and none of them were so heavy on the subject that he is very young, and it is basically always the Same, everything I just said happens a lot of times and also that many times the MC hits characters without any sense.
I would say the route taken byvthe author is different, to me it is not a serious book, i mean the action, calculations, intrigue are not that serious, sometimes it seems the story jumps around, like people accepting new things just like that, some people acting like a gang one time, and the other acting like secret company soldiers, the best way i can describe it is the avengers movies and the lego avengers movie, this book is the lego avengers movie.
Very good. An interesting and unique take on the reverse isekai sort of novel. Unlike others I've read the MC doesn't return jaded and vengeful following some betrayal or tragedy. MC also doesn't bother hiding his transformation, while he doesn't quite flaunt it he isn't afraid of others knowing of his abilities either.
HEY AUTHOR , I AM ASKING TO UPLOAD NEW CHAPTERS IN " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " OR IF YOUR'RE NOT WANT TO CONTINUE JUST FINISH IT IN 10 - 15 CHAPTERS MORE SO IT HAS AN ENDING OR YOU WILL DO CONTINUE THE NOVEL" REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " IN FUTURE.YOUR'RE ALREADY DOING ANOTHER NOVEL WITH THIS ONE SO JUST FINISH THE " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " SO WE WILL GET SOME PIECE.
There is something interesting about this story. Perhaps it is the nuances of intrigue? I have been enjoying reading this and I think others may like it. The character descriptions are limited, which is uncommon in light novels. The setting is underdeveloped, which is common in light novels. There are some minor typos and punctuation mistakes. Overall, it is readable so it gets a pass from me.
Come on author, take some bleach to whitening your feathers and continue your novel (return from the magic world),don't be shy, this novel is good so far but there are too few chapters, don't be greedy to try writing too many other novels, remember that who is running after many rabbits don't catch no one.