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Rental Girlfriend - Upgraded Kazuya

Rent a girlfriend / Kanojo Okarishimasu - Kazuya x Chizuru Kazuya took this break up more seriously than what was depicted in the anime. He thought of himself as pathetic, cried multiple times, and always asked himself what he did wrong to Mami for her to dump him? He thought their relationship was going great. Was it his excessive horniness when Mami caught him stealing glances and trying to steal kisses? (That's why Kazuya's horniness will be toned down here contrary to the series) He experienced his first anxiety attack and after a few days of suffering depression, he realizes how devastating and tired his face was upon looking at the mirror. So, he decided to move on. How will he do it? He doesn't know but he will. Notes: As this is a fanfic, I will do my best to follow the plot but there may be minor changes that may affect major arcs later on. Things such as Kazuya working out, getting a new hobby, and even luckily getting a side hustle as a business consultant which is his talent and forte are examples of minor changes I will be introducing in this fanfic. I am also not a native English speaker, and I apologize in advance with how I position my sentences and how I convey the story. After I finished writing this fanfic, hopefully it will give me more experience so I can write new novels in the future. My boss sometimes asks me to do unpaid overtime, but I will do my best and release at least 1-2 chapters a week. I promise I won't drop this fanfic. PS: I do my best to proofread each chapter to ensure everything is in order and plot makes sense. Others: " " this indicates that character is speaking ' ' this indicates that character is speaking from their mind (thinking) [ ] future format during SMS conversations. I did not use this yet early on since Mami blocked Kazuya. Most likely, she also blocked him in SMS or other Messaging apps. ( ) Author notes Sentences in Italic would be memories that have resurfaced like a flashback.

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Author Notes.

Rental girlfriend / Kanojo Okarishimasu

This novel is highly inspired by the series. I found it only has a few fanfics so I decided that I would create one. Why? I binge the manga upon falling in love with the anime then I realized how the author destroys Kazuya's character development. You would see him improve but a few chapters later, you would see him regress as if the previous experiences didn't help him at all.

SPOILERS AHEAD: (From original series)

Peak Kazuya was in the Movie arc, but I feel sad for the guy for being destroyed by his own author. Some might argue that Kazuya was only able to pull it off because he's focused on one thing, similar to when he's growing a weed that turned out to be a flower, but I don't agree.

Important moments of someone's life are impactful enough that their character changes. Heck, even Mami has more of a cohesion and consistency with her character development than Kazuya. Not to mention Sumi who only appeared for a few chapters.

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This fanfic will be different, and I plan to make Kazuya be as consistent and realistic as possible with each character developments. However, I will still do my best to follow the canon with a few changes from here and there.

As this is my first time writing the novel, I hope you don't mind the grammar and even the possible plot holes if there are. I am also a full time 9-5 worker. My boss sometimes asks me to do unpaid overtime, but I will do my best and release at least 1-2 chapters a week. I promise I won't drop this fanfic.

PS: I do my best to proofread each chapter ensure everything is in order and plot makes sense.