VCris
I've finished the first Arc and feel like it's exit to leave a review. This novels awesome and I love the authors sense of humor. There are several grammatical repeating errors in the novel, but you get used to it with time and, considering English isn't the authors first language, the over all message is still conveyed 97% of the time I would say. Honestly I feel like it's good a lot of potential. Maybe if few aspects of the story and characters were more descriptive and detailed, and the author manages to enlist a good editor, this novel would be perfect. Highly recommend ppl to give this a try. Gonna go take a look at the other novels if the author before starting the second Arc
I really love this story. It is well written in the sense that it progresses smoothly. The MC is a very interesting character and keeps the reader engaged and curious about what will happen next. Plus it's a bl with action. No not smut but fighting. I don't know if we'll get that later though. Hopefully😏. The only downside is the grammar. Words are often switched with the wrong one. Snore vs Snort that one occurs constantly. And was pointed out by another reader. But it's doable I can get past it, mostly.