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Review Detail of Beep in Reincarnated into a Hell Hound - BL/Yaoi

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Beep
BeepLv145yrBeep

I really love this story. It is well written in the sense that it progresses smoothly. The MC is a very interesting character and keeps the reader engaged and curious about what will happen next. Plus it's a bl with action. No not smut but fighting. I don't know if we'll get that later though. HopefullyšŸ˜. The only downside is the grammar. Words are often switched with the wrong one. Snore vs Snort that one occurs constantly. And was pointed out by another reader. But it's doable I can get past it, mostly.

Reincarnated into a Hell Hound - BL/Yaoi

VCris

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VCris
VCrisAuthorVCris

Thanks for pointing out! Didn't realize that :P

Beep
BeepLv14Beep

No problem, sometimes you just need a second pair of eyes or a third to see what you can't.

VCris:Thanks for pointing out! Didn't realize that :P
VCris
VCrisAuthorVCris

Yeah, true, even more that webnovel doesn't show me new commentary, if I want to see them I need to go to each chapter :C

Beep:No problem, sometimes you just need a second pair of eyes or a third to see what you can't.
Beep
BeepLv14Beep

Ugh, I know how you feel, it's extremely frustrating.

VCris:Yeah, true, even more that webnovel doesn't show me new commentary, if I want to see them I need to go to each chapter :C
VCris
VCrisAuthorVCris

Yeah, even more because I like to know your opinion is, but going back all the time is harsh :C But really, if you find any others constant errors feel free to point them out because some times I may not even know that they are wrong, hehe, many thanks :D

Beep:Ugh, I know how you feel, it's extremely frustrating.
Beep
BeepLv14Beep

No problem, keep up the good work.

VCris:Yeah, even more because I like to know your opinion is, but going back all the time is harsh :C But really, if you find any others constant errors feel free to point them out because some times I may not even know that they are wrong, hehe, many thanks :D