I really love this story. It is well written in the sense that it progresses smoothly. The MC is a very interesting character and keeps the reader engaged and curious about what will happen next. Plus it's a bl with action. No not smut but fighting. I don't know if we'll get that later though. Hopefullyš. The only downside is the grammar. Words are often switched with the wrong one. Snore vs Snort that one occurs constantly. And was pointed out by another reader. But it's doable I can get past it, mostly.
VCris
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LIKEYeah, true, even more that webnovel doesn't show me new commentary, if I want to see them I need to go to each chapter :C
Beep:No problem, sometimes you just need a second pair of eyes or a third to see what you can't.
VCris:Yeah, true, even more that webnovel doesn't show me new commentary, if I want to see them I need to go to each chapter :C
Yeah, even more because I like to know your opinion is, but going back all the time is harsh :C But really, if you find any others constant errors feel free to point them out because some times I may not even know that they are wrong, hehe, many thanks :D
Beep:Ugh, I know how you feel, it's extremely frustrating.
VCris:Yeah, even more because I like to know your opinion is, but going back all the time is harsh :C But really, if you find any others constant errors feel free to point them out because some times I may not even know that they are wrong, hehe, many thanks :D