Fate_go_Player
The writing quality gets better as it goes on and I just can't stop reading it's been hours please help... anyway the lvl system is a bit rushed but still enjoyable when he has a clear goal. I know a good book when i read it and although the development could be improved I still feel like if they could just balance the speed with the development it'd be a perfect story to just get lost in, I very much encourage you to read!
This story is Amazing! Although at the start there are a few mistakes like misspelling, wrong grammar and word structure, But the latter two are and few in between. If you're looking for a story with with some-I mean a lot of laughs, comedy, a bit of plot, and a few adventures then this story is for you![img=recommend] The story itself is good overall. The World background is average and character design is above that. The story development is somewhat slow, But! Every chapter is a laugh. The updates also doesn't take too long. I've never waited until a month to get a chapter for this story so it's all good.
Great book overall, it’s funny, it has good updates, the background for the story is also good, overall just a good book. However there are some grammatical errors here and there, but there very minor and it’s still readable. like I said before it’s a great book, and can’t wait for the next chapter. keep up the great work 👍
not gonna bother. author whines a lot. the story is bland and the MC does a 180 in personality with 0 reason or growth. Only cares about mousy. He asks a lot of unnecessary questions that he already knows. He asks and asks and asks as if he was born yesterday and did not train and goes through the fights of life and death as if he is not from another world and as if he is not a strong being. For half the story, he is supposed to be a cold character, few words and a lot of listening in front of the gods, who acts like an idiot, why don't you kill me, why don't you tell the rest of my whereabouts, how you found me, how, how, and he gives a detailed explanation of any question asked to him as if he was a criminal arrested without talking about his strength that we didn't see what's the point of A pen if you can't write what's the use of strength if you're afraid of being lost