wolfster101
Dang I have become addicted to this book. I read for so long that Iโve gotten caught up all the way! I really enjoy the way you made Ryan/Viper pup because he is being a leader and teaching everyone what he knows! I l love how each character has their own personality and arenโt always nice because that would make too boring.
Writing quality - It's alright, not too many mistakes and it's readable. Stability of updates - Pretty meh, no real schedule. Story Development - Too centered around main character, he's the center of this world and nothing happens unless he's there. And we still don't know anything about his past life besides he was a (can't think of the right word) wolf scientist/docummentary person who was betrayed by someone that wasn't expanded upon at all. Character Design - Most characters are pretty two-dimensional and the main character is a huge Gary Stu, he acts like (SPOILER) a super genius detective on the latest few chapters out of absolutely nowhere for example. World Background - There's not much to say. We don't really know anything about it and what we DO know was explained in a few blocks of text (swamp clan, tempest clan, blood clan, etc for the wolf clans and their territories). Overall, it's an alright need but needs lots of polishing and maybe a rewrite when author improves a bit. Nonetheless, you should give it a try before making your own opinion.
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