Ethel_Imaginations
So apparently if uou stick to it it's a vood story... and the premise is nice, but oof the writing style is wanting. It's not bad English or anything like that. It just feels like the author slapped some words on a piece of paper and moved on. No flavour. Calling it a writing "style" is a stretch. But if you don't care about that, go ahead and read. The story is better than other stuff I've read (so far).
I dropped because there is like 30 characters POV on those nobody care about 25. And POV swap 2 to 5 times per chapter. + sometimes its for the same event ? sometimes 2 peoples talk to each other than we switch POV to have the same dialogue over again with the other one POV. It can be good from time to time but you find this at least once every 4 5 chapter.
well i found this in my daily recommendations and thought about giving it a go for 20 min and here i am after using all my fast passes for the day .....pretty good read actually....[img=recommend] #OP MC # hiding true abilities# reincarnation(?) #Gods #kingdoms #Demons #Pragmatic MC #Proactive MC #Multiple transported individuals(?) #systems(?) #Caring MC............
In this story you get the overpowered character quality while also having interesting characters and reactions to the main character! The story is also coherent so far! It's really good. My only gripe is the constant pov changes which I strongly dislike. It makes it confusing as to who I refers to if you happen to forget the one line at the beginning refers to.
First off, I really like the character of the MC. That's my ideal MC. Second, the writing style is a bit unique, as it's placed in well written dialogues that are understandable, and because of the set up of the paragraphs that makes it fairly easy to read. Even the extra unnecessary details are well done. I don't really see any faults within. The novel tells a good story too, although a bit cliche of course, but it's good! 8/10 would recommend!!