First off, I really like the character of the MC. That's my ideal MC. Second, the writing style is a bit unique, as it's placed in well written dialogues that are understandable, and because of the set up of the paragraphs that makes it fairly easy to read. Even the extra unnecessary details are well done. I don't really see any faults within. The novel tells a good story too, although a bit cliche of course, but it's good! 8/10 would recommend!!
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