ForgottenLife
Overall I think this is a really great novel sure the beginning was a bit rough but I did start getting better later. The author did play with the world background which was a nice touch though that nerf was annoying lol. However the author did improve his writing which is more than u can say for a lot of authors.
I do like the character and the story developed in the novel which get us involved in the Naruto world in different timeline. but I didn't get why people expect our world rule in Naruto and are getting offended because of some minor change in story. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------AMAZING WORK AUTHORE ---------------------------------------------KEEP IT UP ---------------------------------------------------------DON'T LISTEN STUPID COMMENTS -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------LASTLY IT A FAN FIC !!!! JUST HAVE TO ENJOY WHY SO SERIOUS ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------THANKS AUTHUR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
At first grammer of this novel truly disappointed me which leads me to drop the novel.After some time i again give a try to this nove, surprisingly the grammer turns out to be good and tha story is interesting.But to me adding the 'sin of seal' to MC is most disappointing.I think 'sin of seal' is the most frustrating part of this novel for me.I hope Author can pull it out in good way, apart from that i am okay with this novel.
This is one of the if not the best naruto fanfic. My experience of reading more than 50 Naruto fanfic can attest to that. Writing Quality: It has pretty good grammar and has fewer to no errors. Stability of updates: It's very rare for fanfics to cross 500 chapters and still have a stable update. This author has been writing for 2 years. Hats off to the author. Story development: you need to read at least 100 chs to get an idea of the story. The author is planning a grand story with lots of unique plots with carefully considered decisions. The starting 50chs will be rough as the author was starting out as an author but he improves really well. These chapters will little harder to understand, you gotta be patient. Character design: I can confidently character development is really good. If you ignore the rookie mistakes in the starting, the Main character along with the side characters have a huge play in the story. The story won't be just Izuna(MC) soloing everything. The side characters have a healthy development too. World development: Whatever i typed above
I'm using google translator, because of laziness, that's life. Author, I found the beginning a bit rushed, with few interactions. Some are funny, some are a little forced. Anyway, I read it to the end, and I really hope it continues. Interactions improved, I liked the originality of how the events unfolded, overall I'm on hype. Thanks for the effort and for having endured the criticism, I rly like your story. For u to know, I'll be with you as a reader til the end. :)
tipo a novel foi boa li até o 217, quase dropei na parte do livro, talves so de rancor de boruto, eca, acho que a novel me enganou um pouco esperava que estive na epoca do 2 hokage mas so teve no inicio e pequenas situações meio que esperava algo mais ja que é o nome da fanfiq, o autor é corajoso, mas acho que meche com a parte de voltar no tempo um pouco de erro, alem do nerf da gula, acho que a historia sequiria mais orgânica sem esse poder tipo so com a afinidade a todos os elementos ja é mais do que suficiente