Reviews of Reborn in AGK with System

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Writing Quality is pretty much average with a some small mistakes and missing word(s) on every chapter. Story development is pretty good but the way the author tell the story is quite bland. First of he said that he is going to take mission(s) if he likes it or not but then after a while he takes every mission. Second, he said that after his friend has been healed he's going out to hone himself but afterwards he stick around the Night Raids and jerk off with his 'GF' Akame.. There's many plotholes in the story but overall we'll wait if the author can stitch them all out Character Design has a little bit of mystery but the MC is not living up the expectation of cold but caring person (that's my POV of reading), he is pretty much of a jerk, he is cold to his 'supposed' brother and didn't care about him, he's like 'I'm training' 'I have a mission' 'I'm annoyed' 'but I still care for you my brother but I'm also annoyed because you're weak' that's pretty much the gist of him (His pretty much complicated ... Update Stability, I don't know the author just post something and almost every post is telling the reader to go to his PatReon and read there... Every R18 is in his Patreon and so-on and so forth.. Can't blame him but almost 25 chapter he post is telling to go on his Patreon... World Background is standard since it was already built the way it is, you can just it on some fandom or just search for it... Overall 3.2 "Just continue to do your work and improve over time" -by PleadingCat

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Fuckying AMAZING FF, this is what I've been looking for all my life... The only problem is that there is not +18 yet. PD: Esdeath Best waifu.

This is an extremely well written story. It explains the backrounds and has good development. The character development and world backrounds informs you so you won't be clueless. In general this story is perfectly written.

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I like it !! Esdeath banzai !!! .

I honestly enjoy the story, but there are some things that might drive people away. Writing quality: 4, it's 4 because sometimes he has too many caps locked words, though this is fine and doesn't take away from story. Story Development: 5,not too much has happened yet, so I put 5 stars, I'm enjoying this story so far so why not🤷🏻‍♂️ character design: 3, ngl... Mc is kinda extra... but that's normal for what you see on this site, just didn't like it as much as other things. Updating stability: the author updates whenever he wants so I can't really judge, 5 stars World Backgtound: 4 this is Akame ga kill world, if you haven't seen it then watch or read the manga and then you have world info... this is just my opinion, thanks for the fic and can't wait for more...

very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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