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PleadingCat
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Writing Quality is pretty much average with a some small mistakes and missing word(s) on every chapter. Story development is pretty good but the way the author tell the story is quite bland. First of he said that he is going to take mission(s) if he likes it or not but then after a while he takes every mission. Second, he said that after his friend has been healed he's going out to hone himself but afterwards he stick around the Night Raids and jerk off with his 'GF' Akame.. There's many plotholes in the story but overall we'll wait if the author can stitch them all out Character Design has a little bit of mystery but the MC is not living up the expectation of cold but caring person (that's my POV of reading), he is pretty much of a jerk, he is cold to his 'supposed' brother and didn't care about him, he's like 'I'm training' 'I have a mission' 'I'm annoyed' 'but I still care for you my brother but I'm also annoyed because you're weak' that's pretty much the gist of him (His pretty much complicated ... Update Stability, I don't know the author just post something and almost every post is telling the reader to go to his PatReon and read there... Every R18 is in his Patreon and so-on and so forth.. Can't blame him but almost 25 chapter he post is telling to go on his Patreon... World Background is standard since it was already built the way it is, you can just it on some fandom or just search for it... Overall 3.2 "Just continue to do your work and improve over time" -by PleadingCat

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Reborn in AGK with System

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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

wait, the whole R-18 tag is locked behind patreon? Lol.

MythicalFanFicGod
MythicalFanFicGodLv4MythicalFanFicGod

Only 25 chapters of telling us to join their pat r E on? Ghosty has been undergoing some serious 'character development', it used to be worse.