Reviews of Reborn as Thor!
Reborn as Thor!
Ghost_84
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- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
The only thing I regret is reading it too early. The only thing I regret is reading it too early. The only thing I regret is reading it too early .
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Quality writing, whenever you try to be funny you succeed, the relationships are well developed and the MC's skills are great, although we never saw how he trained them, that's not a big problem. What I liked most about your story is also what I liked least. The Jotumheim arc has some of the best parts of your story, but it also has the biggest plot holes. 2000 Jotum, only a few hundred gods, it's true that you explained the reasons for those numbers, but the explanation meant little considering that each Jotum can fight 5 gods. The biggest problem with this is that instead of using DxD power levels, you seem to use RoR ones, where the gods are, honestly, disappointingly pathetic, and the Jotum are totally broken, remember that each god in DxD is a power to be reckoned with. How did the gods survive that in the timeline without Thor? How do some particularly powerful gods compare to a Jotum? You didn't explain that and personally I think you should have. Speaking of the power of the gods, will there be any change in the power levels of the Norse with Thor's help? Baldur seems quite promising, I don't think I mentioned this, but you are very good at creating characters, I know Baldur is not your creation, but you created his personality from scratch, same with most of the gods and it was honestly perfect. Thanks for the chapters!!! If you didn't understand anything I said, I use translator, sorry.
Writing Quality 5 stars. Stability of updates 1 star (Author just vanished for two weeks without a word, this is possibly even dropped at this point, even before then the chapters updates were pretty sparse) Story Development 3 stars (it's an interesting original novel but it's not what the genre dictates as this is in no way 'anime' or even a 'fanfic' I'd give this 4 stars if this removed the DxD, RoR and Anime baiting to get people to read it when it's unrelated to the actual novel that's here) Character Design 3 stars (honestly some of the side characters in this are interesting and rather entertaining with their own quirks and life going on in the background but the MC and his immediate family are basically defined by their tropes and/or divinity so one is just the fool of the group, another is the joker that hits on everything that moves, the father and uncle that only see everyone as tools for personal gain/alliances etc which is a shame. The MC himself is a guy that likes to invent and find food before their time due to his memories of the 21st century, he is aimless and does things just to pass time due to boredom and wants to gain strength and flips out if someone harms those he cares about so basically shonen protagonist #69420 who turns into a completely different person who is incredibly violent when drunk and also has a berserker mode where he loses control and forgets everything that happens which is not something I particularly like to see in an MC) World Background 4 stars (It's a good 'original' world created with many pantheons and gods with unique and rather interesting personalities and their background are very close to the real world mythos) People looking for a DxD fanfic and not an original novel should avoid this as It's not even DxD, any character that existed in DxD do not act the way they do in DxD (granted it's a long time before canon but it doesn't really cut it when everyone and everything is different with many added pantheons and gods from outside DxD) this is an original novel that follows real world mythos rather closely and is in no way related to DxD at present, not only are each and every character behaving different but the author also lists pictures for the characters he introduces and they all have a realistic movie/fantasy feel to them and in no way an anime one. I can best compare this to Annihilation Maker DxD with how irrelevant both DxD and AM are in that novel. This is certainly worth a read if you are looking for an original novel with a rather strong mc (he's far from the strongest beings however, just the strongest in his weak pantheon at present) the 'romance' isn't really romantic as it's basically the typical, get drunk and wake up next to a girl kind of situation where they remain friends but mc remains a brick wall despite the girl having feelings for him. The world being created and the mythos explored is rather interesting as well if you enjoy tales of myth, just don't expect this to be a fanfic with proper romance and you can certainly enjoy the novel. PS. For those that dislike forced historical events despite things going very differently due to mc's actions then it's best avoiding this as this novel has the whole 'Fate Goddess' aspect where they have tied events that are meant to happen with the MC's actions so things will still happen regardless, like if a flood happened due to some event, this time it would occur due to some butterfly effect of the mc but still have the exact same outcome.
DONT BELIEVE 1 STAR REVIEWS! There will be always People Who dont like something like this gem. Its like marvel:Breezing through history but its about mythology. Everything is acording to the dxd lore and mc is gathering powers, equipment and army. Jesus calls him uncle, fenrir is his guard dog, gilgamesh is his homie, sif is his wife(although there MIGHT be harem), he has a kingdom where he gather Major op People through the history, hel is his sweet cousin, jormungard (big snake name May be wrong) is afraid of his name. So overall, its one of the best fics I have read in this app.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
The images in this fanfic, is not in the DxD themes a degeneration between the images put by the author and the girls in DxD, so I set to 1, because there is nothing that relates between the girls in dxd and horrors like that disgusts dxd rather than other things. A very good story, but that is marred by images that are not even in the same DxD theme.
