Reviews of RE: ZET-MAN!
RE: ZET-MAN!
Aaron_Chong_6689
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- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
This is so amazing i haven't seen a Zet man fanfic so maybe I'm being partial but this is a unique and creative idea please don't drop Author ;)))
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Author plays ra*e for jokes, m.c. has been problematic from the begin. I hate the fact i put up with author's inane bull on "lets see what he does be patient" after someone pointed out that author is playing off ra*e (harlyquin ra*ing him) as a joke... And ofcourse what do we see after waiting m.c. is picking up the "perfect clothes" for her in the best shops possible. After he gets ra*ed... I swear this dude thinks men getting sexually assaulted is funny. Screw this story.
Writing quality (2 stars, there are errors but it is understood when reading). Update Stability (3 stars, the author is active). History Development (3 stars, entertaining but plot incongruent). Character design (3 stars, innovative to use the concept of zet-man but I don't see a deep character development, lack of logic and reasoning, somewhat cliché the secondary characters). General context (3 stars, it's fine to pass the time while you wait for the update of your favorite novel or fanfic, it's not a gem but it's average). (Traductor Google)
This story actually exceeded my expectations most DC fanfics end up being filled with predictable cliches and annoying tropes but this one has been quite unique. I also like how the protagonist wishs were different from what you offten get to see and didnt feel useless as thier going to be important in the long run. Im excited to see how things develop keep up the good work author.
I really don't do a full 5 stars review but I've gone through 40+ chapters and i can say truthfully. This is an amazing fanfic. Every part of the story is intriguing and interesting to read. An unique approach using a really underated character, that is Zetman. The pace is good, the characters feel believable, and the MC is charismatic. So far the story has been good and i hope that the Author keep doing the good job till the end. Great potential.
This Fanfic is about the MC with The Gamer interface, that's solely maximizing the potential of his Zet-Man powers, in the DC Universe. Now prior notice that my [next pharagraph] bar isn't working, so this might be a bit tedious to read. But, I'll try to be as concise as possible for this review. First up: Writing Quality - There are 5 levels of writing profeciency, and by reading up to chapters 1-18, I analyzed that it was at Intermediate level, and ranging from Low to Mid sublevel while occationally tapping the High sublevel. I won't be explaining the full definition, but basically, still at readable level. As for the grammars, syntaxes are okay, but needs to work on exact word meaning, doesn't regard much the standard dialogue format. Errors here and there, typical for beginner writers. Story Development - Has great potential, but a bit rushed on multiple instances whereby needs more context, and follow-ups. Fragile and disarrayed plot developments. Character Design - An original idea, considering the potential combination of Zet-Man with The Gamer system. A bit inconsistent and needs to improvement in regard with the data to actual performance. Updating Stability - Not an idea. World Background - DC Universe, starting in an orphanage.
summary of this fanfic, first 10 cps cool and interesting, rest of the story is literally absurd and unnecessary and pointless level up, 1 scene +18, overall very short and disappointing, character development comes down to training, training more and more pointless training and the romance is just non-existent until a point later and super fake and out of nowhere with anyone who shows up, no wonder the author gave up on this work, 4.2/10
La novela mas perfecta a mis sueños, deseos y personalidad de desarrollo del personaje.. PROS 1- Otorgando pedidos en vez de deseos 2-En el desarrollo de la historia, todos los poderes se correlacionan perfectamente a mi mentalidad de los Deseos. 3-Sistema sin niveles, sin penalizaciones de misión ni esclavo del sistema CONTRAS 1-Algunas partes de la historia parece que fue forzado (aunque lo corrige con una historia de fondo de porque paso) 2-Tiene partes de los poderes "oscuros" (pero da una solución no milagrosa de trama de armadura) Los otros puntos serian mas personales -No tiene grandes ambiciones como yo las tendría, aunque parece que las va a desarrollar -No desarrolla las habilidades como lo hiciera yo ( mejorar un poder al máximo posible para cada situacion posible) ===== RESULTADO === Hasta el capitulo 69 va genial a mi parecer