Review Detail of Den_Ji in RE: ZET-MAN!

This Fanfic is about the MC with The Gamer interface, that's solely maximizing the potential of his Zet-Man powers, in the DC Universe. Now prior notice that my [next pharagraph] bar isn't working, so this might be a bit tedious to read. But, I'll try to be as concise as possible for this review. First up: Writing Quality - There are 5 levels of writing profeciency, and by reading up to chapters 1-18, I analyzed that it was at Intermediate level, and ranging from Low to Mid sublevel while occationally tapping the High sublevel. I won't be explaining the full definition, but basically, still at readable level. As for the grammars, syntaxes are okay, but needs to work on exact word meaning, doesn't regard much the standard dialogue format. Errors here and there, typical for beginner writers. Story Development - Has great potential, but a bit rushed on multiple instances whereby needs more context, and follow-ups. Fragile and disarrayed plot developments. Character Design - An original idea, considering the potential combination of Zet-Man with The Gamer system. A bit inconsistent and needs to improvement in regard with the data to actual performance. Updating Stability - Not an idea. World Background - DC Universe, starting in an orphanage.