Daoist_Xuyi
ππππA sinister novel, the events were exciting, I liked the character of mc, who is immoral and unscrupulous, he is a cruel person, the construction of the world is interesting, I have high expectations for the future of this smart villain, I hope you will continue to produce more chapters
hello ... l am an Avid reader of your story such as Immortal Domination:White Emperor and a Big fan of your work EVOLUTION:CONQUER and can't wait to see what you have planned for this story Re-life :life as a demon patriarch as well like. How strong he'll make his daughters or will he make or adopt more children for the clan or how he will manipulate the players I Can't wait!!!πππ
Its an amazing story with some simple flaws. The setting is similar to βThe Legendary Mechanicβ but in a cultivation world. Mc is a npc in a world where players are soon joining. Spoilers ahead: The first flaw in the book is the time discrepancy. The cultivation world and earth have a 5:1 time ratio, yet mc somehow uses a store you can use once every month twice in less than 10 days. Similarly, when one of the players are brought up they are always shown to be streaming without taking into account the time difference between worlds. Finally some glaring huge problem is the fact that mc never tries to study his occupations: Poison Maker and Alchemy. One of the mc villain skills lets him get sort of an aura the more death he has on his hands wether directly or indirectly, and making poison and selling them is an easy way to get a huge body count, but itβs not even considered.
Writing a review because the great plot deserves an official review (with mine just 1 to go) I can't say it's novelty as it is the result of stitching various plots already known, but the end result is great. The story per se is good. The writing quality could definitely be better, but bearable (definitely not like some mtl) (I also think it improved?!).
honestly this novel deserve the 5 star . it's not like the other cultivation types novel . where MC it not caution and causes random trouble. this novel follows the unique style with caution and evil villane . the story line and the plots are great . the author know exactly what he is written . a great novel this one is that all I have to say. go there and read yourself to find out more
Good day! Youβre one of the writers that I found admirable because you write great sytem/game stories and youβre able to connect to your readers through writing. I love how you strive in writing and your behavior is something we look up to. I am reaching out to you because we feel that you worth our Offer. If you are interested, kindly reply here, click my profile and look for my e mail and I'll discuss everything with you.
Great book, well written and very original. it isn't a cliche tropes with just the names and powers changed. you can see that a lot of thoughts was put in it while writing the story. hope it will continue to maintain this quality for the rest of the story. a big thanks to the author for this quality work, very refreshing after a lot of badly written books.
Really love this book so far! β€ I love how the MCs personality is written, it's rare that a book has my favorite kind of MC. I also love the foreshadowing of the worlds, I think I know where it's leading & if I'm right it'll be awesome lol I read another review that asked if it was dropped & you replied to say no, the book was just moving to a different platform. The reviewer asked what platform but you didn't reply. I understand that sharing what platform you're moving to on this one may seem a bit disrespectful but I & I'm sure others REALLY want to know what platform you're moving this novel to so we can keep reading! I already searched Google & didn't find anything! Please keep writing this epic story & let us know where to keep reading it! =^.^=
.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................