CannibalTurtle
I'll quick talk about aspects of the book: Strength: - Highly readable grammar - Vivid imagery - Reasonable chapter length - Seemingly well sorted out plot - Dialogues (you can potentially hear the characters speaking in your head) Weakness: - As far as none, however the names were hard af for me to memorize.
The story starts off quickly. Here I was thinking about what will happen and suddenly I am at the hospital. The characters are strong and well-written. What interests me more is how many words will they hop. The chapters so far are fun to read. And I liked the small explanation you gave below the chapter 2. Helped a lot to understand. And the cover is beautiful. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to reading more chapters.!! <3 <3
I gotta say, this is written gracefully. You can feel the hard work here. His vocabulary is great as well, really compliments the writing style. The story is good of course. The updates are pretty stable too, the standard. I love how he vividly displays the world around the characters. Good going fellow author!