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Xiaoru2mthCommentedCh 57 Kevin's Plan- Xiaoru5mthPosted
- Xiaoru5mthCommented
Why white hair? 😒
His snow-white hair covers his forehead but with every passing wind blows them away, Revealing a rising sun-like mark on his forehead. This mark, known as the Surya Yantra, was a symbol of his divine lineage and connection to the sun god, Surya. (But People Will Not Know Until Someone Tells Them Who Already Know About Karna's Birth.)(A/N: I am gonna use this theory in my work.) Golden eyes like Sun itself staring at you, Wearing golden Earrings/Kundal looking perfect on the kid like made especially for him and him only. - Xiaoru7mthReplied to EternalAngeldetailTattoo Awakening: All Kinds of Divine Beasts Carved on My BackUrban · Iced Black Tea From The High Mountain
- Xiaoru7mthCommented
What do you even mean?
He can accept losing to Deva but never to the man who cut his mothers head. Others consider him as Lord but he only see him as a trickster and hypocrite. - Xiaoru7mthReplied to ForManagaCh 138 136. The Multiple Ways
- Xiaoru7mthCommentedCh 134 132. Ranting In Front Of Mother
- Xiaoru8mthReplied to DaoistOvkH1R
Don't bother with author. He is sick we know that and that's the reason he is updating 1 chapter only. I get that. But the chapters he is updating are bogus and full of fillers that it's no use of making sense. I tried to make him understand numerous times but he does not heed to any reasonings.In every chapter, he writes one statement and explains it himself in following paragraphs increasing word count. The whole novel does not have any actual story line. Just fillers and plot holes to keep up eager readers. I have stopped purchasing this story since last month. So disappointing.
Ch 129 128. Kingdom Of Kosala, Ayodha - Xiaoru8mthCommented
When will be the 2nd update? Thanks for the chapter
(A/N : Yeah there will be a second update, Just wait a little more time. - Xiaoru8mthReplied to ForManaga
Actually both were equally responsible for destruction. Well whatever
First, he found out that Vidur had made up the prophecy about Duryodhana, Then he saw how a child was able to trick the most intelligent mind in this kingdom and the behaviour of Gandhari couldn't be even more clear. She hates having a relationship with them. - Xiaoru8mthCommentedCh 117 116. More The Marrier
- Xiaoru8mthCommented
Vidur never made up the prophecy. 😅 is this assumption for the novel plot?
First, he found out that Vidur had made up the prophecy about Duryodhana, Then he saw how a child was able to trick the most intelligent mind in this kingdom and the behaviour of Gandhari couldn't be even more clear. She hates having a relationship with them. - Xiaoru8mthCommented
This is adahrm. He could have been friendly with Lord Krishnaa. 😅
"Hmm, King Kansa, It will be interesting." - Xiaoru8mthCommented
But he is a demon 🤪
(A/N : Do you know humans have 60% of water? - Xiaoru8mthCommentedCh 112 111. Super Affinity
- Xiaoru8mthCommentedCh 110 109. Asura King
- Xiaoru8mthCommentedCh 109 108. Paranoid Karna
- Xiaoru9mthReplied to ForManaga
I have been hearing this for a long time but you kept saying that few more chapters till it will speed up. I remember it's from the plot of getting blessed by Chaos. It's very boring. I seriously dunno how long I'm going to stay with this story at this rate. I dunno if you seriously understand this or not but many readers are dissatisfied by the story. You write many unnecessary words and explanations in each chapter. I know your health is not good but if you are writing more chapters, I suggest you write concisely. Sometimes I feel like you are explaining and re-explaining a part multiple times to increase word count. I'm sorry if I'm being rude but the readers loosing interest meant less purchase and lose of money for you too. Thus I kindly request you to speed up and not re explain a same thing in multiple way, multiple times. Thanks. Get well soon.
Ch 99 99. Lord Ganesha