Reviews of Primogenitor in Marvel

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A MCU x Strike the Blood fic. A never been done before concept, at least as far as I'm concerned. Moreover, the writing style is good and not in script style, which automatically makes this better than 95% of fics in Webnovel. Keep up the good work, Author, and keep the chapters coming.👍

dialogue looks like it was created by an anti social teenager who has never had a real conversation.

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Im the first review................. ....

The story more slice of life than action, too bad for fanfic marvel Thumbs down ,👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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I'm but the harem tag is stopping me from reading your story. harem is a concept which is both unethical and barbaric type of romance. stop with these kinds of Chinese wuxia bs.

MC gets OP as fk power then does nothing except play house in Marvel... MC gets OP as fk power then does nothing except play house in Marvel...

Why does every op mc want to be a evil or anti hero in fanfic. You dont got to be a golden hero. But there ain't no reason to become a criminal kingpin. That kind of thing just gets super annoying after awhile the grey anti hero, evil, my justice is justice character is so played out.

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The story is too rushed. Everything seems forced, and the interactions between characters is as unrealistic as it ever could be. The author is not very knowledgeable about strike the blood or just vampires in general to even try to write this story. This is just ignorant teenage wish fulfillment garbage.

I am at Chapter 10!!Is Harem/Wives has Only 5 Candidates!Will There be Concubine (More than 5)

It's Progenitor not Primogenitor. Nevertheless, it's good so far.

Good fic so far but wander if Damian will ever learn any magic or mistic arts? or can he absorb powers from infinity stones? It will be really interesting if he learns blood magic/manipulation/arts and proper martial arts and techniques instead of brute forcing his way through. Like seriously his huge magic power reserves are a waste if he does not learn magic and a vamp needs his blood and shadow/dark magic especially a progenator. ****Humble sugestions to make this story even better,,,*** **Mc turns Black widow into an elder vamp and add to his harem? Natasha will be op with vamp powers though and become a deadly spy and asassin...** **Mc needs to learn Blood magic and every elemental magic due to his affinity with them cuz of his fameliars** **Mc learns proper refined fighting techniques and magics instead of brute forcing through everything cuz later his enemies will always ne more powerful than the previous** **Hera, Thor's sister joins the harem**

It's good but last few chap mid 40 to 50ish getting worse imo, Natasha arc taking to long and in last chapter 54/52 i think, it using relative while before use familiar

it's hard to find a strike the blood fan-fic, and this is one is just great 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

Apart from some grammatical errors ( mostly switching he/she her/his ) this is one of the best novels I have ever read. Op Mc done absolutely right.

Was attracted to the word primo 😂 Anyways I'll give it a try for now.

the story is good but mc is a little bit cringe.